反派他美颜盛世[快穿]/ The villain has a beautiful face [Quickly wear] [No CP] Free Chapter Opinion.

Link: http://www.jjwxc.net/onebook.php?novelid=4206860

Free Chapter: 1 – 20

Difficulty MTL: readable, but some are hard to understand / detail is missing.

Type: [QT] [Male MC] [No CP]

Disclaimer: I read it using google translate / MTL-ing, so keep that in mind. This review may contain spoiler. I skip some details of the story. I’m learning how to write well.

The chapter 1 – 20, is… without face slapping, nor emotional, nor full of action, flat?

MC have a villain curse, but now he is free?? (from MTL reading), he looks ugly when the curse is on, but since it is gone(?), he back to being beautiful and breath taking beauty.

Then he transmigrate to other him, in that world. He know the plot, and somehow try to change the plot, because his daughter is innoncent unlike green tea false daughter (?).

So he tried to give his daughter protection, and returning her right by taking the false daughter’s title, and give her to Empress dowager(?).

He met and literally conversing with other him in that world, the other him become a ghost who know the future, and regretting his action, so he ask MC for help. They both went on ‘quest’ protect his daughter.

He is checkmating all the heroine’s golden finger / false daughter. If I should say cut all the tumor all at once, so no drama nor face slapping.

The false daughter already making all kind of drama and strategy, but in the end the real daughter placed in Empress dowager, the plan is futile if the actor isn’t there to play with her.

Then somehow he went to town finding prince who will end up dead in future. ‘Try to save his life'(?), and try to change war situation.

And the emperor fell sick. Then MC went on war, and the free chapter is up.

The MC action is mysterious, show don’t tell reader what is he doing, while it is okay, somehow I’m not very engaged or interested in this story, I will read 2 more arc to decide if I should drop this or not.

我再也不敢了[快穿] Review

Link: http://www.jjwxc.net/onebook.php?novelid=3173867

Type: [QT] [Same MC with ‘Different Name’] [Male MC] [Romance] [ABO] [Shou MC]

MTL difficulty? most of it readable.

Disclaimer: I read it using google translate / MTL-ing, so keep that in mind. This review may contain spoiler. I skip some details of the story. I’m learning how to write well.

The story start from a fujodan Gu Xiaoming (influenced by his fujoshi ex-girlfriend), who was crossdressing as a girl (his ex-girlfriend asked him too), they play it as a joke but their joke end up ‘fatal’, Gu Xiaoming getting confessed by a high school boy name Xie Jin.

Panic, he confessed his crime crossdressing as a girl to poor Xie Jin, he felt guilty causing trauma to Xie Jin (the girl he likes actually a guy!), and start avoiding him until several years later he met him again, but yes he act like he doesn’t know Xie Jin.

Since he like yaoi a lot, he write a novel parody about stallion protagonist harem, who doesn’t get his harem, his harem end up lesbian(?), the mtl said so.

Suddenly out of no where, he is transmigrated and becoming Gu Ming, he was tasked to make protagonist happiness / marry, he have plan pairing the protagonist to chara named Xie Jin.

The plan go haywire, the protagonist end up with scum’s white moonlight. And he was wooed by the Xie Jin character.

Anyway long story short, he always tasked to make sure the protagonist he was tasked too end up happy, and he keep bumping Xie Jin (looks similar but different personality).

At first feel guilty, then feel familiar, then yeah.. end up dating together.

In ABO, he as an omega end up addicted to having s*x with Xie Jinyu (yes, his face is similar Xie Jin).

And that mental brought to real world (?), yes he end up with Xie Jin for real. Which is out of no where (maybe because of MTL), when he confess his love to last ‘Xie Jin’ he back to real world. ‘Xie Jin’ last word is “I’ve been waiting you to say that’.

Gu Xiao Ming which already back to real world, run to Xie Jin’s apartement, when Xie Jin open his door, they are kissing and Xie Jin isn’t shock at all, like he already knew why Gu XiaoMing suddenly come.

He was tasked to change the destiny of protagonist (his brother in there too, but Xie Jin is in every world) that end up influencing his real world too. Somehow XiaoMing become thirsty (it is said he is influenced by ABO world).

Does Xie Jin who throw Gu Xiao Ming into the system?? and so Xiao Ming will end up falling in love with him? does that count as brainwashing? or maybe because I MTL-ing, so some details is missing.

I’m kinda disturbed by ‘he end up become soo thirsty because of influence ABO world’ to be honest, and this isn’t my taste of story, the introduction story is made me interested, the world passing is okay, but the ending i dont like (not my taste) also it is kinda rushed up, and leaving me bad after taste.

How about all the Xie Jin he left each world? There is no epilogue / closing at all.

What is actually system, why did he transmigrate?

Why is he suddenly back to real world?

Is he must confess his love to Xie Jin so he can go back?

Is Xie Jin actually the mastermind ?

Is actually Gu Xiao Ming end up with Xie Jin because he actually love him, or because the force of external thing?

Without those transmigration thing, and Xie Jin is there everytime, I doubt he even remembered Xie Jin. So.. is it half forcing him to be with Xie Jin? maybe? since Xie Jin is the ‘only person’ there.

Anyway these thing aren’t answered at all. (maybe because of MTL), it is just end up just like that abruptly.

If you are looking ‘HE’, standard same soul ML, and doesn’t need to think much while reading, I recommend it, since it is quite okay to read to pass time, and pretty readable, no heavy plot, nor angst.

If you are looking steamy stuff, No, I don’t recommend this, this isn’t smutty at all, while it is written they have s*x, it isn’t described much, or just skipped over.

If you are looking for witty MC, revenge, rational MC, high IQ and EQ MC. It isn’t recommended at all, you should look another book.

PS: It is just me nitpicking, if you like this kind of type it is alright, every person have their own taste.

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[ML Not Same Soul] = ML is literally different, not same soul ML, same part of ML, totally different guy.

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Reading I Rely On Poverty To Sweep Through Survival Games [Chapter 31]

Disclaimer: This is only my reaction when reading just like youtuber react to videos, but I don’t use video recording but writing. I don’t own anything. English isn’t my native language. Please click the link chapter and read with me, because this post was made to fangirl together.

Link to NUF: https://www.novelupdates.com/series/i-rely-on-poverty-to-sweep-through-survival-games/
Genre
Action Comedy Drama Horror Mystery Psychological Supernatural Yaoi
Tags
Amnesia Calm Protagonist Clever Protagonist Comedic Undertone Game Elements Game Ranking System Handsome Male Lead Love Interest Falls in Love First Lucky Protagonist Manly Gay Couple Modern Day Multiple POV Multiple Realms Multiple Transported Individuals Past Plays a Big Role Poor Protagonist Power Couple Pragmatic Protagonist Protagonist Strong from the Start Saving the World Schemes And Conspiracies Slow Romance Smart Couple Strong Love Interests Strong to Stronger Survival Game Teamwork Transported into a Game World Unlucky Protagonist World Hopping World Travel
Author(s)
柏瑭

Chapter 31: https://chrysanthemumgarden.com/novel-tl/broke/broke-31/

I read this recently, and it is soo funny!, I love the way author using poverty as justification of MC’s OPness.

The maids served the other dishes in succession. Almost all these dishes were scorched, dark cuisine; it was hard to figure out what ingredients had been used in them.

The ingredients is madam bella’s lovee! /give heart pose , lol

Aren’t you going to see if I’m shy or not?!

The maid have high self confidence at least, a good point? though, the ‘female maid’ kinda delusional ckck.

Sure enough, seeing was believing. Wang Ke truly was an awesome person ah!

Wang Ke Ji!! Awesome! So manly, so bold!, short manly cutie I guess, I still love Wang Taidi telling that his big brother isn’t tall at all hahaha

“Beautiful madam, your beauty is as bright as the moon and as splendid as a rose flower. Before your beauty, I am too preoccupied to taste any food. Please forgive my lack of manners.”

Damn, so smooth psycho guy!, tho I’m liking this guy, yess it is okay to be psycho towards the unforgiveable criminal! don’t do it to innoncent victim!

He would go this far just to not take off his mask! Doesn’t your bottom line hurt, as an advanced player? 

Lol, his mask is more important than his pride!, his mask is his bottom line!

The top floor was four floors away from the ground floor and very far away from other rooms that might contain clues, which made it even more difficult for players to sneak out to forage for food at night. 

Is there pipeline? cause MC will climb ! the power of poverty!!

He said consolingly, “It’s useless even if it was sturdy; they have keys, anyway. The doors in fact are just for our mental comfort.” 

MC always stab on everyone…nerve? idk what is it in english, stab at heart? on point?

Wang Taidi hung his head. “My ge hates that I grind my teeth and kick off the blankets, and I also gnaw on his hair in the middle of the night…”

Bad sleeper Taidi!, and how come you gnaw your ge’s hair!!, are you that hungry?!

In the end, Wang Ke’s life was actually so full of such suffering. 

What his Wang Ke’s sin to have such family /laughs, his mother named him Corgi, and his brother is unrealiable, and big mouth, if he isn’t his brother I bet ge already kill him

Xiao Lan thought of Madam Bella’s appearance. “If you sleep so deeply that her footsteps can’t wake you up, then you can pretty much just be buried.”

Well technically yes, Madam Bella’s body is larger than you. that she will bury you with her.. meat? fat?

There was also a letter next to the vase, with an enormous lipstick mark on it. There was no need to guess who the owner of this mark was; aside from Madam Bella, there was no one else here who had lips so large and shaped so peculiarly.

Signed by kissmark eh?

The handwriting in the love letter was elegant and fine, as if it had been written by a noble lady who had received a good education. It was completely unlike Madam Bella’s fearsome physical appearance. Was this “not judging a book by its cover”, or did someone write this in her place?

Madam Bella appearance, voice, and personality and her elegant taste / style really don’t judge by book’s cover..–, but her cooking like her appearance, disaster.

Luo withdrew his hand. “In my room, I noticed that the teaset by the sofa is made of bone china. Since the bone composition of humans and most vertebrate animals are the same, I have some doubts about where this bone is from.”

….I indeed heard in past some crazy one use bone china made from human.. in horror comic… idk in real life, currently I’m searching about bone china, it is said 30% of materrial is cow’s ash bone.. english is hard.. which one the first? cow bone ash? cow ash bone? /laughs, anyway it is said pretty expensive.

In this way, he kept silent guard. In order not to disturb Xiao Lan, he even stopped imitating the breathing and heartbeat of a human, and was like a quiet and soundless creature without life which grew in the shadows.

This is sounds kinda creppy.. imitating heartbeat of human while he doesn’t have one + staring at MC.. Yandere detected?

At that moment, he missed the inconvenient form of the black cat; at least the black cat wouldn’t be chased out…

See? that’s why stay black cat! why are you so impatient to be human ckckk thirsty guy!

“Please don’t disturb my master, alright?” She heard a soft voice with a cello-like timbre in her ears, and then there was a sharp sting on her neck. “Otherwise, though it may be a little rude to a lady, I can only invite you to enter an eternal sleep.” 

This is kinda make me want to scream, sebastian!!! the butler who is so dedicated to your master!! , also appreaciate the writing, i can only invite you to enter an enternal sleep, sooo good, I love this line so much, so smooth and….gentlemanly dangerous!(?)

Usual times in the player hub: I’ll wear however high I want, I’m the most handsome guy.

LOOL WANGKEE—

Reading I Corrupted The Good Male Protagonist [Chapter 2]

Disclaimer: This is only my reaction when reading just like youtuber react to videos, but I don’t use video recording but writing. I don’t own anything. English isn’t my native language. Please click the link chapter and read with me, because this post was made to fangirl together.

Link to NUF: https://www.novelupdates.com/series/i-corrupted-the-good-male-protagonist/?pg=2
Genre
Comedy Drama Fantasy Romance Shoujo
Tags
Apathetic Protagonist Arrogant Characters Beautiful Female Lead Black Belly Caring Protagonist Childhood Friends Childhood Love Clingy Lover Clumsy Love Interests Corruption Cunning Protagonist Death Death of Loved Ones Devoted Love Interests Doting Love Interests Female Protagonist Handsome Male Lead Magic Male Yandere Misunderstandings Mob Protagonist Nobles Playful Protagonist Psychopaths Reincarnated in Another World Sickly Characters Weak Protagonist Yandere
Author(s)
코로나

Chapter 2: https://acertaincatstl.wordpress.com/2020/11/01/episode-2-a-fatal-flag-as-soon-as-it-starts-2/

Hello, long time no see, I haven’t post again..and I will post something!, I keep forgeting and remembering my blogpost.

I just read this new novel, I think it is pretty funny?, so I decide to revive my site a bit, I already read chapter 1, here link for chapter 1: https://acertaincatstl.wordpress.com/2020/10/25/episode-1-a-death-flag-as-soon-as-it-starts/

Okay, let’s read together! onwards to chapter 2!

Btw, this wordpress changed too much, that… I don’t know which one is which! 😦

I fell back on my bed. When I first met Adele, he seemed to be acting coy and shy, but that felt like a long time ago now.

First time I read the ML name, I thought he was she… and keep replaying rolling in the deep as bgm, Then I tried hard to reform my mind, Adele is a guy not a girl here.

Vocal theory what… ? Just reading the title of the book he’s reading makes me sleepy already.

Vocal Theory? What’s that? How to sing technique? but judging the nuance.. it seems like hypnotizing so MC will be hopeful? I googled it and it say about music theory… well forget it.

“Who are you to decide that?!” “I’m Anastacia’s best friend.”

Ckckck being best friend doesn’t mean you can control her, what’s wrong with wanting to have fun before she ‘died’?

Why the quotes are annoying now? can’t use it like before?!

“I’m sorry to have to speak coldly, but Anastasia, there’s no color on your face right now. I’m afraid that if we go out right now, you’ll collapse.”

Ohh I’m sorry mate, I thought you are overbearing president, so unconciously I said that, I read too much overbearing ML I guess..

The maids often fell for my charms when I use my face like this but Adele didn’t even react. How disappointing.

MC use charm to ML!!!

Unfortunately, it is not effective..

“I mean, I’ve always been sick of dying.But it’s such a waste of time just spending time in my room without doing anything.You might have interrupted me because you’re worried about me, but my only hope is that I would like to visit many places for a short time.You’re just blocking the world even if I say this.”

But she want to visit place!, maybe what ML thought is like, with this burning desire you will strive to survive, not content dying peacefully since she live without regret?

“You ignored my opinions and pushed me back. If you keep doing this, I’m not confident that I won’t blame you for dying.”

Yes yes that’s true MC!!

Adele’s noble and good intentions cannot be denied, but it’s not good for Anastasia, who was tired of being sick for a long time.

Well ironically true, in real life too, you want to be good but in the end it doesn’t received well

Now it was time to get revenge on Adele.

Poor ML, you are being deceived.

What do you say, it’s hard, isn’t it? You’re going crazy, aren’t you? Your good boy’s instincts are tingling, right?

MC are you an S?!, you corupt morally right puppy ML!, well the title isn’t clickbaiting us, 5 thumbs up.

Adele, who had never made a moral mistake, was visibly embarrassed.

It is like kid seeing friend making mistake but asked to stay quiet / keep secret about it.

Adele’s surprising appearance, which was so tempting, made me feel delighted.

Okay, you do have S tendency!!!!

“Now, throw it on the ground, too.”

Now, the corruption begin!!!

This is unique novel, not correcting villain, but corrupting hero HAHAHA

Reading Peerless Immortal Surrounded by Demonic Disciples [Chapter 5.1]

Disclaimer: This is only my reaction when reading just like youtuber react to videos, but I don’t use video recording but writing. I don’t own anything. English isn’t my native language. Please click the link chapter and read with me, because this post was made to fangirl together.

Link to NUF: https://www.novelupdates.com/series/peerless-immortal-surrounded-by-demonic-disciples/
Genre
Action Comedy Drama Martial Arts Shounen Ai Tragedy Xianxia Yaoi
Tags
Ancient Times Appearance Different from Actual Age Arrogant Characters Betrayal Bloodlines Calm Protagonist Caring Protagonist Charming Protagonist Clever Protagonist Cold Love Interests Cold Protagonist Cruel Characters Demon Lord Demonic Cultivation Technique Demons Determined Protagonist Devoted Love Interests Discrimination Doting Love Interests Famous Protagonist Handsome Male Lead Jealousy Love Interest Falls in Love First Male Protagonist Male Yandere Master-Disciple Relationship Mature Protagonist Misunderstandings Multiple Reincarnated Individuals Overpowered Protagonist Persistent Love Interests Possessive Characters Power Couple Protagonist Strong from the Start Strength-based Social Hierarchy Strong Love Interests Sword Wielder System Administrator Transmigration Transported to Another World Twisted Personality Unique Cultivation Technique
Author(s)
Dao Xuan
道玄


 

Chapter 5.1: https://veratales.com/read/peerless-immortal-surrounded-by-demonic-disciples/chapter-51

Yet at this moment, Li Huanhan could not control the desire to have Shizun’s focus on him alone.

“SHIZUN IS MINE!!”

Glancing at Li Huanhan one last time, he said, “Your shidi has been corrupted by countless ghosts so his body is weak. I know that you are a kind person, so you should take care of him.”

‘You are kind, so take care of your lil bro ok?’

Li Huanhan’s blood-red eyes dimmed. He sat beside Qin Jun and glared at him, “Corrupted by countless spirits?”

Qin Jun licked his teeth and held his chin with one hand, showing off an arrogant smile, “Heavenly demon physique?”

The two people surprisingly had the same thought run through their minds: What a faker.

THIS IS HILARIOUS, faker calling each other fake!!, this mini drama xD

“You seem closer to the dead than the living, wraith. I’ll expedite your journey to the afterlife.”

The sword light was like a miniature sun made manifest. Qin Jun glanced at it and teased, “If I’m a wraith, then what are you? A demon that reincarnated into a human?”

Killing time!!, they are exposing each other /laughs

“What are your intentions for approaching him?”

“I was just about to ask you the same thing.” Qin Jun raised a brow, acting as if they were just discussing the weather, “What’s a demon like you doing fooling around in a famously righteous sect like Peng Lai?”

Probing xD

“…Wraith.” he warned with a glare, “If you dare to harm him, I will butcher you.”

Hahaha protective disciple~

He watched as those blood-red eyes became even more sinister. A phrase came to mind, every treasure trove is guarded by vicious beasts.

Hmm this is has nice ring to it.

To a ghost cultivator of his level, Jiang Yinghe was like a decadent pastry waiting for someone to bite into him and savour every last morsel.

And Li Huanhan, the vicious beast whose territory had been invaded, could no longer hold back his bloodlust.

FIght!

 

Chapter 5.2: https://veratales.com/read/peerless-immortal-surrounded-by-demonic-disciples/chapter-52

He thought about those two youths and his heart shook with a foreboding feeling. “…They are unusually talented. I doubt they need my guidance.”

“What is my role anyway-”

Jiang Yinghe sighed, “He took the ancient artifact that maintained the Tai Xu secret realm.”

“Oh…” Zhou Zhengping thought that he couldn’t be surprised by what that young man got up to anymore. Just after his absentminded agreement, the words ‘ancient artifact’ sucker punched him in the face. “Ah?!”

“Hmm….wait WHAT?!” /laughs imagining his reaction.

 “Was it supposed to be a gift for his girlfriend so they could become cultivation partners?!”

Jiang Yinghe felt indignant on behalf of his disciple. How could he stand for Zhangmen-shixiong misinterpreting his respectful gesture as a frivolous fling? He said with some discontent, “Must it be for a woman?”

Zhou Zhengping’s eyes widened. He stroked his beard with a trembling hand, “What, your disciple gave it to a man?!”

Jiang Yinghe, “…”

“IT IS FOR ME–”

“Xuan Wei, I think part of your Qing Jing Peak just flew over.”

Jiang Yinghe watched expressionlessly as his home collapsed.”

“My home–”

“Xuan Wei, your disciples seem to be…” he thought for a minute and choked back his desire to say they were fighting to the death. “…exchanging pointers?”

Jiang Yinghe: “…”

.He choked and just changing his word more subtle, I like this side chara!!

Okay, I kinda want to binge read, should I continue this react… I want to binge! xD

Reading Peerless Immortal Surrounded by Demonic Disciples [Chapter 4]

Disclaimer: This is only my reaction when reading just like youtuber react to videos, but I don’t use video recording but writing. I don’t own anything. English isn’t my native language. Please click the link chapter and read with me, because this post was made to fangirl together.

Link to NUF: https://www.novelupdates.com/series/peerless-immortal-surrounded-by-demonic-disciples/
Genre
Action Comedy Drama Martial Arts Shounen Ai Tragedy Xianxia Yaoi
Tags
Ancient Times Appearance Different from Actual Age Arrogant Characters Betrayal Bloodlines Calm Protagonist Caring Protagonist Charming Protagonist Clever Protagonist Cold Love Interests Cold Protagonist Cruel Characters Demon Lord Demonic Cultivation Technique Demons Determined Protagonist Devoted Love Interests Discrimination Doting Love Interests Famous Protagonist Handsome Male Lead Jealousy Love Interest Falls in Love First Male Protagonist Male Yandere Master-Disciple Relationship Mature Protagonist Misunderstandings Multiple Reincarnated Individuals Overpowered Protagonist Persistent Love Interests Possessive Characters Power Couple Protagonist Strong from the Start Strength-based Social Hierarchy Strong Love Interests Sword Wielder System Administrator Transmigration Transported to Another World Twisted Personality Unique Cultivation Technique
Author(s)
Dao Xuan
道玄


 

Chapter 4.1: https://veratales.com/read/peerless-immortal-surrounded-by-demonic-disciples/chapter-41

Jiang Yinghe immediately recalled how the other gnawed on his collarbone the day he rescued him. He must have innately wanted to return to the righteous path.

NO MC, he just hungry!!

She sighed, “You need to let him consume your essence every once in a while if he’s taken in by the sect. Will Li Huanhan accept that?”

Jiang Yinghe said, “Then he can become my second disciple.”

Yan Caiwei stared at him incredulously, “It hasn’t even been a century since the first one. The people of the cultivation world will begin vying for a position at your side again.”

Jiang Yinghe looked beyond the paper screen and lightly stated, “This was truly a fated meeting between us. I do not accept those who are ordinary.”

HAHAHA you just told me I’m the only one!! but now you have another? cheater!! /laughs, maybe the progress will drop?

But these two children, one with the heavenly demon physique, the other corrupted by countless spirits…an outsider would think that you were a humanitarian aiding the sick [5].

Jiang Yinghe rubbed his tea cup for a while, “It’s more like I’m delivering relief to the poor.” [6]

Idk why I laugh, like, you such untainted, yet your disciple all odd and ‘evil’!

He sat on one side of the bed and said calmly, “Come with me to Peng Lai.”

His words were straight to the point with no room for interpretation. Before the other could reply, Jiang Yinghe added, “If you don’t cultivate the immortal path, your body will rot in three to five years. Although this road may be hard, it can extend your lifespan dramatically.”

Come come to me to the peak!, rot in 5 years– damn!

He offered his hand to Qin Jun and softened his voice, “I was the one who rescued you, so I have no reason to cause you harm.”

I gave you food, and hurt myself so trust me!

Blood spilled onto his lips as Qin Jun took Jiang Yinghe’s fingertip into his mouth.

Like baby sucking finger?

In his opinion, the inner conflicts of the righteous way were no less vicious and underhanded than those of their counterpart. There was no one as unblemished as the one before him. Others only spoke those pleasant, idealistic words, so how did this person have the courage to actually make them a reality?

He attracted to pure and honest shizun!!

He suddenly spat out Jiang Yinghe’s finger and leaned towards him.

Jiang Yinghe did not shy away. There was no need to be too cautious with how weak this person was. This was just a civilian who had just endured…

His mind went blank as the other embraced him.

He’s so desperate for comfort. Ever since he was rescued, he hasn’t said a single word about his parents. They were probably killed by the rampaging ghosts. Jiang Yinghe let out a sigh in his heart. If something this tragic happened in the well-adjusted and peaceful modern society, it would be pitiful enough to get government assistance [8].

“Aww he scared, need hug, because he is scared!” //let him hug him.

He was just thinking ‘this child really is pitiable’ when he was bitten again on his collarbone.

Jiang Yinghe, “Is your zodiac sign the dog?”[9]

Your retort MC! xDD

Qin Jun slowly looked over at him, thinking deeply about something. It was quite a while before he said, “Shizun saving this disciple’s life is something that Qin Jun will never forget.”

Hahaha xD, is this oath?

Chapter 4.2: https://veratales.com/read/peerless-immortal-surrounded-by-demonic-disciples/chapter-42

When the sect master Zhou Zhengping Zheren heard that he accepted another disciple, he was as happy as an old man like him could be. He even personally came for a visit, only to be stared down by Qin Jun’s unnerving gray eyes.

How was this child just like his Shixiong? He looked at Jiang-shidi as if he was a tasty piece of meat while everyone else was met with silent contempt.

This is just like his shixiong (2), ….THE NPC REALIZE WHILE MC NOT HAHA

 It was only after he had finished that Yan Caiwei deigned to tell him how this new disciple was corrupted by countless spirits and was even more unstable than the other one. Who knows when he’ll succumb to a qi deviation?

Zhou Zhengping looked at Jiang Yinghe who was wearing his usual expression. He managed to force out, “…This child must have other outstanding qualities.”

“Another oddball? ugh– well if it is my disciple wants…. I guess it is good seedling..”

Until he left, the Sect Master could be heard murmuring under his breath with a troubled expression about how grim the future of Peng Lai looked…

“Is this righteous or evil sect? /identity crisis” -sect master

Every time he shed his blood to cleanse the miasma in the other’s body, it would jump forward an increment.

Jiang Yinghe thought with satisfaction: it seems that taking care of the health of his disciples was the right way to go.

Is he a tamagotchi? feed, affection up!

It was Qin Jun who had leaned over. He stared for a while at Jiang Yinghe’s snow-white throat before saying, “This disciple constantly causes trouble for Shizun. I…”

“Eating shizun’s tofu.”

A kind person… To someone like Qin Jun it was like an amusing joke. He was entirely focused on Jiang Yinghe as he finally figured out why he was so different from any other righteous cultivator.

Although he seemed cold and distant on the surface, he was mature and warm inside. He had an almost infinite patience for others, and was a diehard optimist.

This was all the more apparent when contrasted with someone like himself.

“So this guy is too sunshine, that I attracted to him”. what a loveable MC.

Receiving special treatment from someone like this sent a rush of gratification through the evil spirit’s body.

Becoming ‘M’ for his shizun?

Li Huanhan stood at the entrance with a thick metallic scent surrounding him. His clothes were ripped in several places, and blood was freely flowing from his wounds, down onto his tightly closed fist.

“Shizun,” a flash of ruthlessness passed through those red eyes, “…who is this?”

“MY SHIZUN IS CHEATING!!!”

His selfish and possessive nature came out to play.

A yandere has been created!!

 

Reading Peerless Immortal Surrounded by Demonic Disciples [Chapter 3]

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Link to NUF: https://www.novelupdates.com/series/peerless-immortal-surrounded-by-demonic-disciples/
Genre
Action Comedy Drama Martial Arts Shounen Ai Tragedy Xianxia Yaoi
Tags
Ancient Times Appearance Different from Actual Age Arrogant Characters Betrayal Bloodlines Calm Protagonist Caring Protagonist Charming Protagonist Clever Protagonist Cold Love Interests Cold Protagonist Cruel Characters Demon Lord Demonic Cultivation Technique Demons Determined Protagonist Devoted Love Interests Discrimination Doting Love Interests Famous Protagonist Handsome Male Lead Jealousy Love Interest Falls in Love First Male Protagonist Male Yandere Master-Disciple Relationship Mature Protagonist Misunderstandings Multiple Reincarnated Individuals Overpowered Protagonist Persistent Love Interests Possessive Characters Power Couple Protagonist Strong from the Start Strength-based Social Hierarchy Strong Love Interests Sword Wielder System Administrator Transmigration Transported to Another World Twisted Personality Unique Cultivation Technique
Author(s)
Dao Xuan
道玄


 

Chapter 3.1: https://budgettranslations.blogspot.com/2020/04/peerless-immortal-3-part-1.html

The youthful cultivator she called Xiaoan-shixiong turned around to look at her with a face full of grievances. The air around him was different from the others. He sighed deeply, and snapped, “It’s Li Huanhan-shixiong.”

Isn’t he looks handsome? I thought there will be girls flocking, but it seems too afraid? finally! a common sense!

Li Huanhan’s reputation in the Peng Lai sect preceded him. That maniac who cared only for furthering his cultivation, even if he was strong enough to be called the best cultivator below the Nascent Soul stage,

That maniac— why people!!

only had eyes for his Shizun, Xuan Wei Xianjun.

Okay this is ambiguous..

There was no sound array present in the inner palace, so the waiting disciples received the phrase ‘harmonious relationship’ with complicated expressions.

They didn’t know if they should spit blood at the thought of Li-shixiong’s ‘harmonious relationship’ with them or be jealous that he could receive this kind of unique treatment from Xuan Wei Xianjun.

“YOURE WRONG, NO!”

 [You have encountered a key term: {only}]
What is this???
The progress bar jumped to 70 percent. But this increase raised Jiang Yinghe’s suspicions about what exactly this display was measuring for the first time:
…My disciple is only at the Golden Core stage, but this progress bar is shooting up like it’s strapped to a rocket. Isn’t this a bit too…fast?
Is this brushing your disciple affection system???

The remaining flesh clinging to the body peeled away, and a body that still had some residual warmth fell into his embrace. They seemed to wake up, and suddenly embraced him.

It was like a newborn hugging their mother (4).

Mother hen shizun now?
Was this top-level soul’s embrace part of the standard reincarnation package?
A reborn??
The moment Jiang Yinghe came into contact with the other, the system sent out a notification sound, saying that this unknown man had absolute potential and to accept him as a disciple. He was pleasantly surprised that he’d managed to fish out a target like this. When he took the other’s wrist to estimate his age, he was bitten by this child.
HAHAHA it feels like small tiger, new child but now he bites

“You will be safe by my side.”

Qin Jun froze. He was covered head to toe in miasma and rotting wounds, and yet this person was still kind enough to try and pacify him.

This was an unprecedented situation for Qin Jun. He was stunned, and his thoughts became fractured.

He bit this person only to be rewarded with warmth and security, where was the logic in this? Qin Mo continued to lap at the bite mark as he pondered.

‘This is out of nowhere’, you kind to me??

MC: well because you can become my second disciple!!!

Jiang Yinghe believed that anyone who had experienced that kind of situation would be timid and afraid, so his straightforward audacity was astounding. He placed a hand on his injured collarbone and healed the slightly red teeth marks with spiritual energy.

Qin Jun continued to lie in his lap and stare at his long fingers with a hidden, appraising and somewhat covetous gaze. Then the steel gray eyes quickly closed with restraint.

He couldn’t eat him…for now.

When baby tiger decide, no I can’t eat my mother hen hahaha xD

The misunderstanding of MC tho /laughs

Reading Peerless Immortal Surrounded by Demonic Disciples [Chapter 2]

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Link to NUF: https://www.novelupdates.com/series/peerless-immortal-surrounded-by-demonic-disciples/
Genre
Action Comedy Drama Martial Arts Shounen Ai Tragedy Xianxia Yaoi
Tags
Ancient Times Appearance Different from Actual Age Arrogant Characters Betrayal Bloodlines Calm Protagonist Caring Protagonist Charming Protagonist Clever Protagonist Cold Love Interests Cold Protagonist Cruel Characters Demon Lord Demonic Cultivation Technique Demons Determined Protagonist Devoted Love Interests Discrimination Doting Love Interests Famous Protagonist Handsome Male Lead Jealousy Love Interest Falls in Love First Male Protagonist Male Yandere Master-Disciple Relationship Mature Protagonist Misunderstandings Multiple Reincarnated Individuals Overpowered Protagonist Persistent Love Interests Possessive Characters Power Couple Protagonist Strong from the Start Strength-based Social Hierarchy Strong Love Interests Sword Wielder System Administrator Transmigration Transported to Another World Twisted Personality Unique Cultivation Technique
Author(s)
Dao Xuan
道玄


 

Chapter 2: https://budgettranslations.blogspot.com/2020/04/peerless-immortal-2.html

 

These two years were not easy for him. Li Huanhan

I thought his name is Li huan huan which sounds adorable to me

Jiang Yinghe unconsciously moved to support the injured disciple he had waited a millenium for.

‘I’m afraid you die and I need to wait for another millenium!! take care of yourself!!’

The grey ‘A Jiang Shizun System’ at the top right corner of his vision suddenly had a blood-red ‘Han’ character (4) as well as a progress bar below it. The bar was barely filled.
The system too cruel!!
Is it estimating the degree of progress he made raising his disciples? After a thousand years of cultivation, Jiang Yinghe had long calmed his heart to remain distant from worldly matters. He did not place his hope on returning home on the system, which is why this change aroused only curiosity instead of alarm.
Old man , tranquil heart?
Slowing opening his dark red eyes, a swirl of demonic energy was brewing inside.
Jiang Yinghe did not see this, he only heard his strained voice.
“Shizun,” He called out quietly, “this disciple wants to ask why you accepted him that day.”
I’m confused, is he deviating or, indeed from the start demon cultivation? it is from start right?
Jiang Yinghe acutely grasped this point. He reached out a hand and began to stroke his disciple’s hair softly. To him, this was what a good Shizun would do at this moment.
Li Huanhan’s body stiffened, “…Shizun?”
Jiang Yinghe made a sound of acknowledgement and responded sincerely, “I chose you based on your unique aptitude.”
The person beside him was momentarily silent, “Based on the heavenly demon physique?”
“What about the heavenly demon physique?” said Jiang Yinghe, “This master believes it is a fine quality.”
Aww ❤
His consideration for his Shizun’s reputation was the only reason Li Huanhan did not kill him then and there.
The only reason-
, “Then Shizun will be reminded of me every time he sheaths it inside his body.”
EXCUSE ME, your way of phrasing it!!

Reading Peerless Immortal Surrounded by Demonic Disciples with me! [Chapter 1]

Disclaimer: This is only my reaction when reading just like youtuber react to videos, but I don’t use video recording but writing. I don’t own anything. English isn’t my native language. Please click the link chapter and read with me, because this post was made to fangirl together.

Link to NUF: https://www.novelupdates.com/series/peerless-immortal-surrounded-by-demonic-disciples/
Genre
Action Comedy Drama Martial Arts Shounen Ai Tragedy Xianxia Yaoi
Tags
Ancient Times Appearance Different from Actual Age Arrogant Characters Betrayal Bloodlines Calm Protagonist Caring Protagonist Charming Protagonist Clever Protagonist Cold Love Interests Cold Protagonist Cruel Characters Demon Lord Demonic Cultivation Technique Demons Determined Protagonist Devoted Love Interests Discrimination Doting Love Interests Famous Protagonist Handsome Male Lead Jealousy Love Interest Falls in Love First Male Protagonist Male Yandere Master-Disciple Relationship Mature Protagonist Misunderstandings Multiple Reincarnated Individuals Overpowered Protagonist Persistent Love Interests Possessive Characters Power Couple Protagonist Strong from the Start Strength-based Social Hierarchy Strong Love Interests Sword Wielder System Administrator Transmigration Transported to Another World Twisted Personality Unique Cultivation Technique
Author(s)
Dao Xuan
道玄


 

Chapter 1: https://budgettranslations.blogspot.com/2020/04/peerless-immortal-1.html

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Start!

It’s not that Jiang Yinghe doesn’t want to take on a disciple, it’s just that no one could meet the standards set by the ‘Little Jiang (3) Shizun System’ that transmigrated over with him a thousand years ago.

THE HELL THOUSAND YEARS AGO–

Originally he thought that the first method would be easier, but here he is a thousand years later. He’s nearly forgotten what Earth was like, and even some of his cultivation peers have passed away.

Existencecial(?) crisis, 404 memory has lost overtime

Jiang Yinghe carefully examined the youth in black clothing. No wonder the system described him as ‘talented beyond words’. He announced, “I don’t want him…I want you.”

Idk why I automatically sing I want you!!! atamaa no nakaa ~  Heavyy, rotation~ /laughs

He turned and held out a hand to the black-clothed youth. “Come.”

Take my hand, walk on the aisles //NO

That’s all I can think about, else are pretty normal? This is pretty good premise, will read next chapter of course!